Reasons For Not Using Ideas From Narrative Breakdown 2

• Version 2 of the narrative was quite basic however it improved from the first narrative which was without any detail. This version was again quite simple and did not have in depth information.
• Did not include all shot and frame types in detail. 
• Did not clearly say what editing techniques were going to be used. 
• The story line did not link very well therefore decided to improve the narrative to a better standard.